the "good" and "detailed" face at the front... the lines and wrinkles makes it look like a piece of fabric mate.
pen makes you look like a four year old when you cant draw all that well (IN THIS STYLE!!) you are good, just, as i said before, not realism, try.. expressionism, draw weird things from your mind, you would be good at that:)
okay, you'll think im a cunt, but im trying tohelp
well, first of all, DO NOT put a meaning behind the drawing if it was a quickly thought up piece, it makes you look dimwitted and takes away from the art itself.
you are trying way to hard to make it look like "art" dont TRY and make art, because it makes anyone who sees it think your a try hard, instead why dont you just draw or paint whatever what you WANT and feel like rather then something trying to impress others.
personally, this is really really bad. you are a good drawer, but mate, realism isnt your thing, sorry...
keep at drawing, remember for yourself k dude, otherwise yeah..
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